Sunday, May 3, 2009

Garlic Rewritten

There comes a time when I just have to make a change that I really don't want to.

Today was the day that I chopped, hacked and otherwise dismantled 5 chapters of Garlic. After those pages were put back together, they were only 3 chapters long. And the timeframe covered shortened from 2 weeks to 2 days. Editing is still required for the whole manuscript, but at least this one issue is resolved in a way that will, hopefully, make it more palatable to a reading public (but first - the agents/editors/publishers).

Note: Revised timeframe to 4 days. Gotta have some wiggle room.


  1. Oh my. Seems like Garlic and I have a lot of catching up to do!

  2. I'm on my next to last front to back revision. Still have one more to do after this that has a specific task assigned to it.

    You and Garlic? Heck you and I have some catching up to do!